At first, the story is admittedly a little confusing, but at the same time, it's interesting enough to make you want to understand more. Over the next chapters, everything starts getting clearer and you find out just how thought out the world-building is.The grammar and writing quality, in general, is good, I had no problem understanding anything.Looking forward to the next chapters!
I don’t think I ever written a review for all the novel that I have read. Commented on them, gave my criticism, but never a review. The reviews here don’t do this novel any justice. This is one of the worst novels I have ever read. Sometimes some MC are ridiclously overpowered but this MC, it’s just plot armor. The background for this story, horrendous. The description - terrible. The characters of Earth - idiots. There are some novels where the background story is made pretty late and things will somehow make sense but this one is just ridicolous and just lazy writing. The only good thing is the grammar is actually ok. That’s it. Don’t waste your time with this novel. Author’s summary was ok but this book is just dumb.
Well writen story, author managed to balance amount of tropes, and thanks to that as of chapter 66 there has only been one mc vs arrogant young master scene and no face slapping. Quality of writing is really good and stable, unlike most novels out there where authors/translators familiarity with proper grammar and punctuation is at "can it be eaten?" level, and mtl is a way to go. Pacing is good, multiple POVs contribute to reader being aware what is happening with other characters (and there isn't any "XYZ pov" commentary). One thing that i have on mind though is lack of significant backstory surrounding MC and his friends/lovers(not enough teases). World background is already laid out, thanks to which a situation where protagonist is akin to a carp going on a jumping spree through dozen consecutive dragon gates (*coughMGAcough*) hopefuly won't happen, as author would have to introduce another dimension(physics) for it to be a surprise. Overall story is interesting, presenting solid background, without there being typical infodump chapers. There are no greek philosophers here, so we don't see cultivation progress measured in levels or fighting prowess being put into linear equation. One thing author may wish to spend time on is expanding vocabulary beyond common purview, so as to one may gaze with glazed eyes, beholding writers splendor and ingenuity.
After Shirou's suggestion was agreed upon we headed to the vendor he suggested. After using our maps and asking vendors for his whereabouts we finally managed to find the shop belonging to the "master smith". We entered to find a large, muscular and bombastic black haired man behind the counter ready to greet us.
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