"Yeah… it was nothing… just from our last battle is all, I'm fine honest" Issei laughs while scratching the back of his head hoping that Gohan and everyone else would believe him.
Shamelssly rating my own translated book. Haha. Hope everyone enjoy. I do love the protagonist and story progress. Really tempting and excited me more chapter by chapter
Bro your story and everything is best and good but there are some major grammar problems in there so please i insist use deeps@ke ai or something it will really increase quality and once again your story is good i say in top 10 in currenty new novels.
It has a promising premise with a nice slow burn and introduction to the story and the world. A little bit of input, hit the accelerator a little more on the plot because it's moving a little too slow, especially with the characters. Will like to see more soon.
Let's give credit where it is due... this novel is incredible. From the detail to the immersion experience as well the ethereal atmosphere..its all amazing...the character are grounded individuals instead of becoming a collective character, I appreciate that..the world building is solid, and without going into spoilers I think this is a top tier read....
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