I slowly nodded and pushed him gently away and walked upstairs to my room... What have I just done? I don't know what happened to me... How could I let a killer into my house!! Killers deserve to die only because the stuff they're doing!!
I think it's a very unique take on the system genre, it's actually great to see a novel where the mc is not ridiculously overpowered with a system straight off the bat which in turn helps set the premise for these big built up challenges and battles that the mc has during the course of the novel. There is some grammatical errors but you can for the most part understand what the author means when reading so it's not to difficult to grasp. Overall I believe this novel is worth the read so far.
Going to start with getting the bad out of the way: you will find errors and a lack of ponctuation at times, it's not very bad (there are worst in this app) but you need to be ready for it ( it probably wouldn't be a bad idea to get an editor but those thing cost money i guess) and also, this is more annoying then bad (alot of people do it in this ap), the writer, sometimes tries to "milk" it, he doesn't do it alot but it does appear from time to time.Now, with the bad out of the way, the story is very good, you can see he took some inspiration from Only I Level Up, if you like it you'll like this, the story progresses at an even pace, the main character is relatable, the world is very interesting and the side characters are solid, the writer is very good with updating the story ( that might change with time because of life but so far so good) and you can see the writer as plan for his story that, this is me guessing, will take sometime to complete so the story will be around for a while. I recommend this story for everyone.
Great opening and solid introduction the male and female leads. I like how the pasts of both characters is still largely shrouded in mystery to be unraveled along with the plot. Definitely curious to see where the story goes from here. Spelling and grammar are tight, with only the very odd typo. Prose is clean and flows nicely. I see this story shaping up quite nicely.
Writing Quality - Great third pov. Either way, I am a sucker for 3rd pov. There is feeling a of darkness and mystery as we see the journey of Mc. Story Development It is stable I felt it was slow during the initial first chapter but who doesn't live seeing Mc in pain and feeling the misery of losing her parents? Oh! you guys don't. Weird 😕.Character Design: My fav thing about this novel is that Mc is great She doesn't just get used to the family secret or any of her new family bs. She goes with the flow but can feel she just doesn't magically forget the people who took care of her for 10 years.Updating Stability: You are doing great work author. Quality over Quantity.World background: Full of mystery Satanic stuff. The author is just great at writing dark themes. Would love to see the school arc
I'm rating this based on what I've read so far, I really love the characters, the plot everything. I'll give another review after reading till the end, but I love it so far😍, highly recommend 😘
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