The SSS Beast King: Rebirth of the Legendary Predator

"Why you came in between??."

"Your future son or daughter," said Jonas grinning.

Herald. "...Wait!!

yuni :" terima kasih teman-teman karena selalu menemani ku, dulu aku hanya anak miskin yang hidup secukupnya dan sekarang aku menjadi orang terpandang, yang tidak akan seorang pun menolak permintaan ku"

Judging by the hole in the satellite picture

Writing Quality: 4/5It was not bad, better than a lot I seen on here. Keep up with the good grammar. Although the dialogue bothers me because I don't know who is talking.Updating Stability: 5/5I give that to everyoneStory Development: 4/5Good plot, although it is more descriptions and less dialogue. I did enjoyed the storyline and pacing.Character Design: 5/5Not bad, I don't have much to say though.World Background: 5/5Extremely descriptive, doesn't live anything out on how the world is.Keep up the good work!

a good starting ig. well i like these kind of stories ig

Hello, Everyone! I am the author of The Unrivaled Holder: Rise of the Dragon Monarch. Serve this thread as a Q&A portion. If you are planning on reading this, you might experience info dump between chapter 1-11, because I wrote this one way back 2022 and that time, I felt like it was necessary. Lmao. But do not worry tho, because it changes when chapter 12 started. It is kinda fast paced as well. If you are not fan of fast paced book, this book ain’t for you. Lastly. if you find this book good, or just decent, please vote for it!  I promise you that you will experience fresh plots especially on the later chaps. Thanks a bunch and stay hydrated!