the system gets stronger, and he gets more abilities. The more he possesses people, so in 19 chapters, he possesd 1 person..... not even worth being bathroom reading material
Sir I am fan of you work I support you own art but why mc like that even somekid got bully they fight back.Can you make more mature the mc like he almost killed by other only plot protect him.(sorry to my English).
This is an enjoyably fresh take on the respawn/do-over story ( MC dies, finds himself waking up in his past, generally as a teenager with knowledge of the future.) It's well written, no info dumps (at least, nothing that *feels* like an info dump) and a good balance of dialogue, action, reflection and description.It's fresh, because instead of being OP because he's now a know-it-all, he's gone from being a know-it-all to being a newbie. There are a few more inversions of the type, including a lack of revenge-driven plot, and some choices that are more the road less traveled than inversions.There's a nice touch of levity, and kudos to CrossArk for putting in a very timely prologue ( I don't normally like future glimpse prologues, because the synopsis should have given the reader enough of a glimpse of the future, and they very rarely add to the story ) that doesn't do any spoiling, but has some good advice. I hope it will make for some nostalgic reading in the months and years to come.My only complaint is the release schedule - more chapters, please!!
I am quite interested with the idea reincarnator versus reincarnators. I hope you'd pull that off well because I can't wait to read that point in this novel. So far, so good. Keep up the good work!
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