The silent blade of Varanasi

I want to like the story, but the grammar is just hard to stomach after  10 or 15 chapters... please find a beta or proofreader... This story has so much potential, but the bad English is ruining the enjoyment of the story.

Can’t get past the first couple chapters. Already glaring flaws in the story. MC during a beast tide picks up attributes and instantly becomes trainee level warrior. Literally at the same time people are like go back inside MANY times but then the author skips over and he ends up at battlefield. Also dumb how he doesn’t have to be near a beast or anyone really to pickup stuff. Magical fire wolf drops orb and he picks it up. It gives him magic fire ball skill cause of course. And then you have the shock oh wow didn’t know the scrawny kid could kill a wolf reactions. Also remember supposed to be a deadly beast tide, but he could leisurely think while everyone around him is telling him to go back. Andyeah just overall poorly done kinda annoying to read.

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I like it so much...the author is the best i give it 5 star the characters are so amazing and you can stop reading it so what are you waiting for read it now

I don't read Sci-fi at all. As it's not my favourite genre or anything but let me tell you this is really very different then what I thought. The concept of virus and it's effect. the writing style and flow of the sentences are just amazing. it came really smoothly without any mistakes. I must say I recommend this to all whoever like Sci-fi this is a gems for them.

The author is a cool dude, he did a good job on the content of the book and created something that can be read with pleasure. I can only wish you good luck and hope for new chapters

As the author ill have to give myself a fair critique point of view because i know my flaws and some might see the Glitches in the story line, Alex’s background ignored and further more like those but pls Just have patience as all your observations are more than welcomed .

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