The Shepherd Alone on the Hill is a Genius Wizard

An updated comment now that, I am further into the story. Okay It's pretty good? I honestly don't really know what else to say. We get to see more about the world. It is a slow burn but seems to be speeding up.

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author, pleasethe novel has a great future, maybe they can even hire the author, I like that it does not advance so fast and explains things well, the esper reference to''toaru majutsu no index''?, I wonder what skill woke up, if your requirement to awaken it was to reach level five of copper's esper range, then the ability must have a huge load for the whole body, if the body is not powerful enough, it will not be able to resist the ability, it would be great if it obtained the ability from ''all for one, of the anime boku no hero academia'', is the ability that the villain has, allows him to steal the skills of others and make them his own, also can combine them to create new attacks, also allows him to grant stolen skills of other people, example: if the MC steals someone's ability, this skill becomes his, but if he wants to give him the ability he stole from another person, he can do it, maybe if the MC wakes up this skill, you could add him to Go back to the skill and change the name, it would not be the same, if the MC woke up this ability, instead of killing those who beat him for not having skill, he can steal them, by doing this, he could make they feel what it is not to have a skill, they literally will descend from heaven to hell, their families will despise them and maybe they will banish them and they will not have anything, besides that with this ability, the MC will be able to steal the enemies' powerful ability, will not have to worry about the repercussions, which can be done by a person without an ability ?, nothing, but a requirement to steal the skill is that first the MC has to defeat them, so that the skill is not too broken, the MC would look for the stronger skills and would be done with them and would be invincible in the future, and immortal, because surely there is a skill that makes you immortal not ?, If it is not haci, can be two, example: a skill gives you life eternal, and another gives you a capacity of super regeneration, this ability allows you to rebuild your whole body up to a drop of blood, but desmora a lot of time (10 years or more ?, of course if you add another skill called super acceleration, you can accelerate this process and only will need a year or less ?, besides that as the MC to said that they live in refuge cities (they are enclosed by the beasts from the outside) he could build his own empire, to do that he would have to be super powerful and intelligent, and have a squad of faithful followers to help him, could find a group of children orphans, these children would see him as their savior and they will always be faithful to him, then he begins to train them, and with his ability, he can give these children skills I steal from other bad people, not so strong (3 stars or more if the limit is 5, maybe the strongest skills are 10 stars? or was it the other way round?), but if the skills are united, they will be extremely strong, then the legend of the invincible squad would begin, where each member has 4 skills (3 that gives them the MC and the original skill of this) the squadron could be from 5 -10 child (s), (better if all the children were women, so that when they grow up they are all wives of the MC, after all an emperor needs an empress and concubines) the MC could steal in the future a skill share or union ?, an unknown use of this skill could be that ..., I better explain it with an example: the MC has the ability of eternal life (a skill of the highest ranks, although it has no offensive power, through training you can be very strong, this process is very slow, a normal person would never live long enough to get the benefits, but if you have eternal life?), have wives, do not want these to die of old age, then with the ability union or share, oo tra (has a maximum of the number of skills you can share, example: 4?), bind your ability to eternal life to one or more people, making all your wives have eternal life as long as the MC is alive and they are faithful to him, because if they leave with another or betray him, the MC withdraws this option and the one that abandoned or betrayed him, begins to age again, the MC builds his mega empire with which he dominates the planet becoming the stronger person of this, with the most powerful skills that I steal, then the story of the novel expands into space and the MC discovers that there is more life in the universe, and in the end the MC becomes the most powerful, capable to create universes, etchas this great thing that I came up with for this novel, no?

I love it. Very clean writing and language. I must say that the author usually rashes through with his works, so I relly hope that you will take your time Author.

So I will not be dropping this give me some time to write these unreleased chapters i want over 2000 word okay stick with and put this in your library

It only added to his dissatisfaction.