Props to the author simply for the fact that the mc killed some dude for pills; this king hasn't seen this level of ruthlessness since the days of this king's youth (oh how this king misses you Martial God Asura)
This started with good potential but it has failed to develop. After a few initial indications of a plot there is no story development and the world background is largely unknown. Updates have gone from unstable to no updates for weeks now. Several similar novels have spontaneously disappeared from my library or have been renamed to "deleted" and their chapters and summaries are removed. I imagine this one will vanish as well. I am removing this from my library so I don't waste any more time on it.
Well done to the author. Your writing style is different and lovely to read, however it has the potential to reach more readers and admirers. The author adopts an inconsistent approach to grammar and punctuation and would benefit from spacing out their moments of dialogue to provide an even powerful impact.
It's Chen Mu again ... This name is really famous . . . at least three novel I've seen the protag with this name haha ... I like LoL what I don't know whether this is good or not ~
Forget the negative reviews, these people will trash any novel for no reason -_- This is a hidden gem!!! I even started reading its google-translated version!
This story moves crazy slow. The lack of progress and constant POV switches to fairly unimportant characters is getting really tiring. Dialogue is also used or exposition at least half the time, and it makes everyone sound fake.Oh, and like so many of these types of stories, the MC knows literally everything for essentially no reason. This "super intelligent" MC got killed in a completely avoidable way and lucked into getting revived at the start. It's not a great character.Decently entertaining story, but not good writing.
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