The Protagonists of the Novel Escaped

This book needs more creativity, but for your time and effort and ideas put into this, I'll give it a 3 star rating. Also, the update stability is very good and constant.My reason;Almost every event is repetitive. He meets a friend or old colleague, they get a call, he follows them to said locations,  he finds out they are in a tough situation, and he bails them out.It's the same everytime, nothing new. Also, in terms of female characters, it would be more interesting if the story was centred around a female rather than many that don't add to the story or give very little.For example, the first lady he met, though, she had a bad personality but it fits real life situations when a lady is looking for one who can help her financially. Honestly, if you worked around her, including her into the story more, things will be more interesting. She doesnt have to be his main love interest, maybe except she change. But story is a gradual process.The high school friend he met, the one he did a grand birthday for, she is so boring. Their interactions doesnt add anything to the story.That's why I said rather than centralising the story around multiple females, choosing one or a few would be much better. It needs proper structuring and this would probably ' truly' become a 4 star novel or higher.That's just an idea, not an absolute, I'm just saying. It doesnt have to be the way I said it. You are the author, and your decision is always wahats best for your story, but let there be a target, proper structure and so on. Thanks for the story, I'll keep reading 😀

Translator should really write some new synopsis, the current synopsis is not doing you anything good.And I haven't even read any chapter, it just I slightly feel pity to this novel not getting much vote.

Enlo Mina. Jungie doesn’t know where to start. From the first chapters alone, different emotions filled the pages—and they colored ML’s personality enough to make us know him by heart. We love him already heheheheh. The Great Mo, his foul mouth and his quirks hehehehe. For the writing quality... of course it was perfect heheheheh. How can Jungie ever worthy. Cherly-san writes clearly and you’ll know what I’m talking about from the first read. Jungie will look forward to more chapters, adventures, and the crispiest curse words hehehehehehe!READ THIS MINAAAA!

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i enjoyed this book, although i am waoting for the character to grow a bit more and not be pushed arouns as much. hope the updates come fast ;)

Very good start to the book but cannot give a more thorough review without more chapters

Will everything change now? He knew the answer very well.

The wickedness of the stings, it did not falter its killing. He controlled them and he alone longed for the crimson red to run down his chin with glee. Licking his lips, a grin wide with white teeth, a man with the dragon-like shades, its red tint that of blood. A loud chuckle escaped from his throat.