So to start out this is an amazing novel I am all the up to the most recent chapter 237 and although the beginning is slow it opens up a whole new world once his second year at school starts and is a great novel to stick with as you will be blown away by the potential this story has! I love the characters they are very well done the interactions get better wnd better throughout the novel and leave me very satisfied! I will add more at a later date i am not the best at making reviews.
damn predictable and trashy.it's cliche as hell, hypocritical as hell, annoying mc as hell.why this got selected out of all the good trial reads, hell if i know.
Don't walk away from this one....RUN! The summary forgot to mention he is in a modern world and likes to stream his deductions... A large chunk of the chapters is the viewer comments. So many of this kind on trial...not one selected as far as I can remember.
I do quite like the style you've got going here. It's quite descriptive and gives your reader a very vivid imagery of what is going on and gives their imagination enough food to imagine some small details themselves. Which is a good thing. Although, if I may add a small point of critique: I notice you have rather long paragraphs. In essence, there is nothing wrong with that, but quite a lot of people like shorter paragraphs, with dialogue laced through them to keep the story flowing. Rather than long paragraphs. I will admit you have shorter paragraphs near chapter 5, so I think you are on the right track! Keep up the good work!
Good read*.*this is very captivating the new kid on the block.Never judge a book by it's cover the guys in the middle of the road thought this character was a walk over I like how he approach them play innocent.They were thinking this fellow is a pushover big mistake.Dark honour great title chosen it says exactly what the title of the book is all about.If you could please unlock more chapters.
Roland would be lying if he said he wasn't excited. Seeing the gate being activated as well as seeing the old witch's hand 'go through the wall', he was more filled with anticipation for what was to come.
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