the phoniex rises

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So overall it’ a good and interesting book. No major grammar errors or any major mistakes.However, I started noticing some flaws and decided to drop around ch. 48. Here is my reasoning:I get a feeling that the writing is a little shallow. The mc encounters some problem that isn’t explained too much, then immediately god-snaps and fixes whatever it is. For example, building and creating all of his inventions. Very few people know the exact compositions of materials. Going further, very few people have enough expertise in a field to recreate even one of the varied things the mc is making. How can a person be able to make say different shampoos, which the author probably just googled a basic recipe, and then go ahead and start making concrete and buildings. Making a building is super complicated even if you are able to get rid of the manpower issue with magic. All of the sudden inventions just start to become unreal and unimaginable for the mc to come up with them. Especially if there were previous reincarnator. How the h*ll is the mc the first to come up with the types of food he is. Add onto that the cleaning supplies as well. The first thing on a reincarnators to do list would have been these exact things so why is the mc the first. I mean, the previous reincarnator was a WOMAN. Do u expect a WOMAN from the modern world to go one day without at least trying to make some kind of shampoo with magic. It’s jus bullshut. Based on everything that is happening I can already know what is going to happen in the locked chapters just by their names. My real problem is there is no depth and realness to the other world. The only real worldbuilding we get is medieval magic sword world with demons. NOTHING ELSE. The food of the world isn’t described, everything is worse than what the mc can bring to the table. Author, u do realize that America didn’t make all the types of food in the world right. It just has a bunch of the worlds food available. That means that there is different food everywhere. In this other world, all u could bear to describe of their food was the bad jerky that the knights had. Otherwise all u did was say that the mcs food was the best. That’s all. I mean, come on. If a place was able to make chocolate and tea, two things that take complex actions and recipes to make, u expect me to believe they can’t make some other food like fried food. U also realize that fried food isn’t the best food in the world right?Oh well I’ll stop ranting. It was an ok story but if u want a deep and interesting story, don’t get ur hopes up for this story. Its a watered down version of Wise Man’s Grandson and other similar isekai stories. I was expecting a more mysterious story due to the synopsis but all it is is the mc and the reincarnation of his wife, i.e. the princess, being so blind that they don’t recognize each other the entire time even though the author seems to make a point of when they should recognize each other.

~ Jenny~

<p>"Aku ... mengakui!" Tao Yunxiao mengepalkan wajahnya, menahan penghinaan, sebelum mengucapkan kata-kata itu dengan susah payah.</p>

knew how to walk properly,

Without much ado, Nero guided her hips as she rode on him. His hands reached out to her full breasts who were inviting him for a suck but he could only squeeze and knead them. Daryle was a fast learner. She used her instinct to drive her man wild. They both came to their climax exactly same time. She slumped on top of him as they felt each other's panting and heavy breathing.

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i did as told i made the talisman then approached him and spoke. "i will put the signature on your ears now. while you absorb the talisman, it works with ether so i have to activate it for you." i put it on his forehead and activated it immediately his clothing and stature changed to where i couldn't tell him not an elf. i washed away my thoughts and put the death seal and ether signature on him. it cost me a chunk of my cultivation and made me dizzy. i hugged my knees on the ground he wrapped around me and put his head on mine. i was then in a white metal room that felt strange he was gone. the walls turned transparent and i beheld a massive city of lights and moving parts on a white gray surface. the sky was black as night and there were no people or animals or plants anywhere in the distance.

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

You'll never shine if you don't glow

"Oppa"

Only shooting stars break the mold