what's with that cover pic? Martial Gamer already use that...............................,..............................................................................................................................................
If you read my bio you’d know that I love FUTBOL!!! ⚽️❤️⚽️ and I hope this is not one with a harem, and a low self-stem or pervert MC. I want team spirit, friendship, and rivalry, romance? It can wait at the door because this sport fan can’t wait for a great futbol novel. Don’t let me down!!
You really need to work your focus. Dont jump around so suddenly and explain about other thing in the midst of something. Man, i skipped most of the chapter when you suddenly explaining about those unrelated people like when you explain about the background of a shopkeeper. I mean who care about what happened with the shopkeeper or story of some spirits who take about 2 or more chapter and then disappear into the coffin. Cmon work your focus and do the plot properly, 60 chapter wasted without proper introduction and you want to go premium? Really? What are you supposed to feed your reader? Info dump?
You know when you have found an excellent novel when you just start reading and you still want more every novel this author has brought out is like that from character development to world development overall this author is just awesome
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