the phoniex rises

"Yes, thank y.... Wait, What?" I said and still confused.

Excellent novel although it's still in it's initial stages it has huge potential. Definitely recommend to read this novel. The Details are good too. Keep up the good work Author 👍

In my opinion, this story is very good.. but in some parts, there are mistakes in the writing. Maybe I understand because you are just learning to write, and for the character design there are no illustrations but Judging from the description of some of the characters, it's quite interesting... the downside is the character illustrations, but stay enthusiastic!

I like the writing style! This kind of third person always catches my attention and so as the plot. it was fire🔥 the details and description were transitioning smoothly. keep it up always♥️