Shameless author review!This is my first time ever writing any kind of book, therefore don't expect it to be perfectThe story is still in its infancy stages, so any kind of advice and or critique would help me a lotI would really appreciate it if you guys gave it a try!
I've watched a lot of anime and read not too much mangas, this is the first Light Novel I read and I have great expectations. ngl i like the first chapter is great the second chapter is decent. uhh i also like Yumiko personality i hope there's more character this good written (at least for me is good written.)
This is one of the most well written cultivation novels I have read. It has one of the most realistic portrayals of love and the main character seems realistic. At most the side characters are a bit cliche, but it makes sense in universe and they are based of the “young master” cliche. It has great humor and it flowed smoothly till I stopped at ch 25. All in all, 10/10 novel.
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