The Mind World

I like the concept of brothers ❤❤❤❤

i love this novel. super nice and the character 😊😍😍

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Found it to be average at best. Tge MC is boring with no real development of world, character, and story. While I do understand that it's only the beginning and may just take awhile to Rev up as a trial read it's all I can go off of.

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Godly book… World background: it’s on earthCharacter design: cautious then turns low key and cautious then gets more  daring.Story development: idk how you did it but you managed to basically perfectly mix real life and fantasy…Stability of updates: 8 months and over 260 chapters… with no premium…Writing quality: it’s not bad, as in I have seen better and I have seen worse

The overall idea of the novel is good, it's the reason I gave this a novel a try but 2 major things have made it so I'm hesitant to continue...1 - although not bad so far, the mc has shown foreshadowing of becoming another happy go lucky, plot armour, arrogant mc that this site is famous for, he hasn't done anything to fall into that category yet but the way it has been written and the way the mc thinks and reacts to the things happening to him are way to similar to those sort of novels this site is famous for (perhaps I'm being paranoid to be fair).2 - (and honestly this is the main reason) the fact that it has become locked at chapter 5 is mindboggling, It is way to early to tell if this is a novel I want to commit and pay for. I'm already somewhat skeptical about how it will be progress for the reasons stated above, so with that kind of mindset how am I going to pay and continue such a novel. If there is anybody who has gone on ahead and read the chapters 5+ please tell me if it is worth paying for to read, the premise of the novel is really interesting to me and I'm just hoping it doesn't digress into those brain dead plot armour story's. But until I know I'm not willing to pay, I've been burned to much on this site

Bathing in happiness I thought this would finally be when I would turn it around but God was not so kind to me.