La historia parece interesante, aunque no se porque el MC se volvió de repente tan arrogante cuando es muy débil en el momento y debería de dejar la venganza después de todo para cuando pueda ya abran muerto de vejez, a bueno, la historia esta buena sigue asi
Thanks Author for this story. I am particularly intrigue by the world builing here and system description. From the realm eg emperor, immortal etc to the levels of blood line awakening stages and connection.
1. The first part with regards to Kain, sheila and Alex that is narrated well making way for alex anger and his want for revenge
2. The second part where the 3 brothers passed down what they have to Alex -through the merging of bloodline and knowledge, i enjoyed that best - very detailed and vivid in the description of the process.
3. The sarcasm comments between Alex and Camilla i laugh at most with Grace playing peace maker in between their small arguments
4. look forward to see what tribulations Alex have to face given what the brothers predicted given Alex’s strong bloodline awakening reaction - Will he survive n succeed in his cultivatimg journey?
In summary i enjoyed the read. good work on detailing out the background realm, stages and how each clan and level work within the system. look forward to what’s next. Good job 👍
I really enjoyed reading this story so far and I have caught up all the way, I do think that people should give it a try. I'm not saying that it is perfect, but other than the annoying main character in the beginning which he just develops better as time goes on I really like the story. I find most of the side characters interesting and the story always keeps me engaged and even though he is slightly overpowered he is not just steamrolling through the other characters there are a lot of character that give him a tough time.
Amazing story, lots of good interactions between the mc and the side characters. Everything generally seems like its fits within the story. However the biggest issue with this story has to be the alters as they came out of nowhere and they honestly take away more from the story than they add. Honestly if they just suddenly disappeared in any of the chapters than I’d be happier.
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1. The first part with regards to Kain, sheila and Alex that is narrated well making way for alex anger and his want for revenge
2. The second part where the 3 brothers passed down what they have to Alex -through the merging of bloodline and knowledge, i enjoyed that best - very detailed and vivid in the description of the process.
3. The sarcasm comments between Alex and Camilla i laugh at most with Grace playing peace maker in between their small arguments
4. look forward to see what tribulations Alex have to face given what the brothers predicted given Alex’s strong bloodline awakening reaction - Will he survive n succeed in his cultivatimg journey?
In summary i enjoyed the read. good work on detailing out the background realm, stages and how each clan and level work within the system. look forward to what’s next. Good job 👍
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Keep up the good work author can wait for more.
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