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Great story and great character development the world building is simply put amazing it has all the potential to reach the top power rankings Hopefully author doesn't drop it [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Yeah, so i had to shamelessly give myself another review but this time i gave myself 5stars.
the last review i gave myself had a low rating because i had just started writing and to be honest i didn't have any confidence in my wirting. I know that i can delete it, but my first critic came as a reply under my review, so i am very reluctant in deleting it.
Although my confidence has increased, i am still a learner in this aspect.
and just to add a little something, a little over-view of MC's character. A lot of people critic it saying that he was described to be apathetic and then later on he started acting like an 11 year old ..
yes he was apathetic and he acts childish now, and there is a logical reason for that ( I can't say the reason because i feel like i would be dropping a spoiler.)
After coming to the new world he realized something that he never knew. if you want to know what then read the book...
he's first described to be calculative and apathetic with the exception of his first love. Now its seems like he lacks IQ and is way too immature. he sounds more like a rich brat than a killer whose suffered 7 years.
It started off really good, up until all of a sudden he has multiple personalities which just completely ruins the story. Not to mention how cringy it got once it started.
Let start by saying I dinged the author on updating stability since its been a while since we have had any updates (between chp 292-293I suspect the author went on vacation but didn’t leave a note. That being said, this book is great. The character building is top notch. The fact that the MC has multiple personalities who talk to each other makes their arguments hilarious . Plus its used as a plot point to explain that while the MC is OP, he cant use all his power at the same time because his personalities are the ones that know how to use a particular power so his personality switches depending on the situation. Its like have 4 very different MCs in one. One is super shy yet blood thirsty to the point where he terrifies the others, one is cold and analytical , another is a flirt and con artist always looking for that next score or scam and then we have our normal hero.
The world building is cool. I love his mysterious master who’s a pervert that basically tortures him in the name of training. The biggest plus of this novel is the character development. You truly get a feel for what motivates the MC and all his companions. There is no harem(Thank God) although girls like him. I highly recommend this book. I have been trying to motivate the author by spending coins and voting for the book. Hopefully my dastardly plan works.
when I first started reading this I wasn't sure it was something I would really get into but I've spent the last few days buying coins just to power read this. the author has created a wonderful multi-layered world (pun intended for those who have read) that has completely captured my interest. I am very much looking forward to reading more of this. Keep up the good work, the_fallen!
Well you've got me as a loyal reader as long as you keep up the solid work! I'm still in early chapters but I'm speed reading my way though and I'm actually loving it! Soon you'll have me pestering for more chapters lol.
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Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact
rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
the last review i gave myself had a low rating because i had just started writing and to be honest i didn't have any confidence in my wirting. I know that i can delete it, but my first critic came as a reply under my review, so i am very reluctant in deleting it.
Although my confidence has increased, i am still a learner in this aspect.
and just to add a little something, a little over-view of MC's character. A lot of people critic it saying that he was described to be apathetic and then later on he started acting like an 11 year old ..
yes he was apathetic and he acts childish now, and there is a logical reason for that ( I can't say the reason because i feel like i would be dropping a spoiler.)
After coming to the new world he realized something that he never knew. if you want to know what then read the book...
Thank you 💝💝...
signed: shameless/crazy author...
The world building is cool. I love his mysterious master who’s a pervert that basically tortures him in the name of training. The biggest plus of this novel is the character development. You truly get a feel for what motivates the MC and all his companions. There is no harem(Thank God) although girls like him. I highly recommend this book. I have been trying to motivate the author by spending coins and voting for the book. Hopefully my dastardly plan works.