The Lost Princess Of Lordor

Its too much cliché.  Story has too many forced and unnecessary plot. As for characters its your mc who is thrash in is previous life but suddenly become courageous and challenging guys here and there. Overall iits ot my cup of tea.

Good original novel.Its been enjoyable so far. Only critic I have is the comparison between the strength of the realms. How does a normal cultivator differ from the MC? You've rushed through the spirit realm without taking the chance to explain the difference in strength in comparison to a mortal.

The only thing I noticed is the whole shoving three different dialogue into one paragragh. You always start a new paragraph when starting a new dialogue.

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Fernandus had been given the task of uniting the entire town into a single unit while maintaining security. Will the arrival of the longsong citizens order will be harder to maintain due to the rats among them.

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Masing masing kemudian memilih bola dengan menenggelamkan tangan mereka kedalam gelembung itu untuk mengambil bola di dalamnya.

I walked slowly toward the edge of the wall and had a peak. there was seven deformed people coming my way and two bottomless bodies coming this way. i ran back into the room.