The Loom of Beginning and End

In front of him, three boys a head taller looked into his eyes and the mocking gazes that had taken place moments ago stopped. Something was different this time. They had beat him various times but now something was different.

کمی سرم رو خاروندم و به اطراف نگاه کردم.

      When he got to the office he used the folder in his hand to cover the upper part of his trousers that got the most dirtied.

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AhhhWhat can I say, in fact, where do I start? there's just too much. I'll cut it short though.A wonderful, amazing and thrilling story. You'll definitely be lost after the first few chapters.I won't spoil the fun. Just dive in.I'm taking my own ride too, 5 chapters in, and I'm sure to continue. Thanks for the story, keep up the good work author!!

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This is a gem, a top notch story really, if u r a fan od dual cultivation, god of dual cultivation, naked sword art, this baby is on par if not better in some aspects. the system is great which isnt present in the other, the author has put a lot of effort into it. the lemons r defently top notch, the story has a lot of deapth, and so does the system. the story is fun. i realy like the fights there is just enough for it be exciting, and not to much it gets boring and have u skip 10 chapter and the mc is still in the middle of his swing. the back story also comming a long and have some depth.  very good wrting as well.  thats all positve stuff there is a lot more. so give a try u wont be disspointed i only wish there was 2k chapters.now for the low ponts, i wont call them bad, or negtives, as they r crutual to the story and it wont work without them, but i felt that they slightly slowed down the pace. and it all has to do with the tower. now u must understand the tower is amazing, and i feel that it still has not shown its depth and how good it can become.  but at the same time it has so amny paths options and specs, that at some point i think between chapter 110 to chapter 140 it slowed down the pace of the story, just by simply going thro its upgrade and gowing down its option. and everytime it feels too big when it comes up and could monoplise a huge part of the story. now that is probibly a negative only due to the format of realase of daily chapter had it been a finished novel i would not have felt that way. as i always feel anything that slowes down main story is a negative, when i have to take it a chapter or two at a time instead of a finished novel.  so its not really a negative of the novel just of the format mostly. but other than that its a perfect novel.

This novel / fanfic is average. Starting is not good with world building and very slow pace but he is trying to make it better in later half.This is story for those who like to explore different types of Pokemon worlds , especially in the old era. I have read some really great ones sadly they stopped releasing for some reason.You can skip some chapters also if you find too slow pacing will not make any impact in the story that much for earlier chapters.Author should rewrite them if he gets time.Release is also slow as if he works for 5 days a week.Author should like this review if you are reading it.