The Legendary Moonlight Sculptor: Dad is a Legend

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While the prologue is a little slow, Chapter 1 jumps into action quickly. I'd like to see a little more of the boy before he recovers. I think the contrast between the inflicted boy and the astute man would make for terrific character development. However, the ML comes across as strong and wise, someone I'd be willing to follow. I particularly appreciated how much the father cared for the boy and the efforts he took to protect him. Keep writing. This story has a lot of room for development and surprising twists and turns.

don't know much about the story and can't predict what will happen next.writing is good but chapters are top short.

La escritura es bastante buena, y aunque no estoy muy versado en historias de transmigración de este tipo, la historia me parece que está tomando un buen rumbo, espero que siga así autor-san.

Well... not for sissies. Pure lemon, deception, ntr, etc.                                                  .                                                                                       .