The Legendary Mark

Elijah : No titles for my coding?

James tried to leave her behind, but she then grabbed his hand. "What is it about me that you don't like!!!" She said as pushed him against the wall.

That last part caught Polort by surprise, 'Ugart, How did he....wait...' he thought to himself, "Ugart, You wouldn't be talking about Ugart the Mighty right?" he asked out loud.

I smiled back and looked over at Liam who was pulling Carter and Nathan out of the water.

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

She took a step toward me and began to slide her hands indignantly up and down her hips.

Everything is on point can wait to find out what happens next

I am making this reveal just to say that I will be taking a 1 week break from my novel. I will continue after that trust.

Ang Ganda ng storya at Ang galing ng author talagang napaka interesting ng kwento 😘 abangan ko sa susunod na likha mo 😍❤️

Apocalypse, werewolves and Yuri. Seems like a promising premise. The main character seems a bit simple, though still worth the read.

Overall: Great book keep going, the story was interesting to make push through despite the cons, unfortunately it seems to have gone on hiatusOkay, here the cons and some tips (more for improvement rather than anything else):- Use past tense, instead of present.- too much description, that sound robotic- this relates to the last point, but: too much philosophical description, adding some here and there is good, but not every action needs to be described like that (use it rarely and wisely) Exmp: "He held the pill..." not"he held the pill in his hand it's weight signifying his only lifeline in this harsh reality, as it acted as a strong reminder of the cruelty of the world.."This is more of a tip, but I think you should get a better cover (I am happy to help if you don't know how)Anyway, good luck and hopefully you come back soon.

Chapter which was scheduled for today, has been postponed to tomorrow (31). It will be a special chapter. I appreciate everyone's patience.