I have never been bored of a narrative of sexy time! Wtf man. If you are going into Shakespearean lingo, do better. The narrative, the flow, the dialogues are all over the place. Literally it’s like a virgin imagining how sex would be like is writting this story! Omgoodness it’s so BORING!
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It was a great read. I liked the twist from chapter three. Keep up the good work.