The Last Thread Walker

"Aww, dear, just admit you are in love with me. okay, after the cameras go out you can tell me . This is how we come to an end on today's brand new episode of 'The celebrities fun time'.

I placed my nails in his back and started to scream only because-

"Why is that the answer Mat?" asked me.

I just love the continuity of the book.. Thimbs up. keep up the good work

Please continue the visual novel it's a good visual novel book!!

I'd say the book does a great job at starting off the reader excited, however, the way the scenes jump is a bit disorienting, but nonetheless good descriptions.

the story is sooo exciting theres no boring chapter im glad that i stumble upon this novel ..thank you author

So I think the idea that this story is about is interesting (that's what got me into this) but I read the first 3 chapters and I'm pretty sure I can say that while the idea is interesting, the character designs are pretty bad, things seem quite forced and just appear out of nowhere, the grammar is horrible and you can barely tell what is going on throughout the chapters. The story also doesnt really explain why things happen and that it just happens randomly causing quite a lot of people to be confused. Hopefully things are more smooth in the latter chapters, and I  recommend the author to re-edit the first few chapters because it actually doesnt make sense. Read at your own risk

The story is full of mysteries. I can't wait to find out what happens next, which keeps me excited to follow the story. Nice job!