The Last Seal

With a deep low shout, Jiang Cheng carried the heavy casket alone. With him being at the 6th level of the Qi Jing realm, carrying the casket alone was a piece of cake.

Zalaria blushed a sweet dark red color unable to form a response. They finally made it to his seat for breakfast. She stood next to him blushing. She didn't understand how he could manage to bring her to a point where she was unable to bite back with a clever response.

I can’t give a good review but what made me stop reading was the accent in which they use I get it’s to set the time but bro I can’t take it 3ch was my limit personally I think you could’ve just used present day accent and speech nothing would’ve happened you didn’t need to take the extra mile dude one piece works just fine without the old speech although if you did change it in the later ch just tell me I’ll read from there or just read till I get there

Today, I tried reading my own book, and I came across some cringy parts that I never want to read again. But I have to admit, the world-building is great! Overall, I'd give it a solid 10/10 though, of course, I'm a bit biased as the author.

It's my novel so i rate it high . Mwuahahahahh

Have just Red the first chapter, and l am already impressed.  The writing content is great, deserving of respect.  The character design has me intruiged

the moment they left the Yandere girl in the few first chapters, i drop the novel, dont know why but maybe it could go different?