The King’s Lover

Very interesting take on the common system genre stories, never seen a medical one. The ways the system is written seem to make sense except for the speed that the MC can progress from just being an intern. Otherwise I quite like the story. 4/5

Wow very selfish MC................And his two lead harem members are very cunning and smart................... Well welll........... ......

The mc is not one of the bois, nuff said.In anycase, I find how independable the mc is annoying. I have a feeling the story will have a repetitive cycle of the mc being too confident, face slapping, then there is a hiccup where he is having a big disaster, and then magically it tides over.I mean the fact is, he has not once concluded any sort of testing towarda his abilities. He just sort of hope it works. We havent seen him activily train his abilities either, especially since ita been said that the extent to which he has his abilities arent to the level of the original patient.He is dumb, arrogant, and extremely lucky. Also he seema to be far more physically able than it makea sense. Like sneaking that piece of paper, how? I dont remember a patient that could do that, he most certainly doesn't have that type of skill.  How bad of a secret agent are u if a total noob can do that? Horrible character design..Ans the whole seducing the woman to get her on their side, seems like such a dumb way to get ppl to so things. U really think someone like her would abandon their ambition and work for some punk who only wants sex? Thats horrible world development and character development. TfI can also see him being blinded by lust. He is a hopeleas pervert. Like how vain do u have to be to seek satisfaction in the number of women u conquer. And obiously his superiority complex, that comes from wanting to steal other ppl's women. I can see his stealing a mans girl, and causing aome type of chaos for no reason. All bc he needs the satisfaction of being better than other men. Thats pretty vain and I dislike it. Its like that other book with the 10 keys, i can easilt see thia book degrade bc of the pervert quality.Ik alot of my review is full of opinion. But thats what a review is, my opinion on a novel, and i think its not great. Honeslty i think the novel is just baiting all the h.orny ppl into it.

Nice concept and plot, romrcommended to anyone who likes to read and is enjoyable and relaxing. I hope you make it to your writing career....................

I See One Second Into The Future: Loner In The Apocalypse is a story about about Kairos, someone who can see one second into the future. He uses this ability in order to survive a sudden apocalyptic event, where the sun is deadly, and monsters appear.Novel had at interesting design, and the main character had a interesting ability, however there's too many things that cause you to go "that just doesn't make sense".Writing quality is pretty good. It's readable, no obvious grammatical errors or mistakes. Nothing to write home about either. (4/5 stars)Onto the story development. Like I said previously, this novel had a interesting premise, where the sun can kill you, while it creates various monsters. However, there is a downright ridiculous amount of plot holes. I'll just make a quick list.- The words "loner in the apocalypse" are in the title. This is the opposite of what happens, the main character immediately makes a party with people who he doesn't trust. Later on, he accepted someone else into the party that he himself admitted that if the guy didn't have a certain weakness, he would try to kill them all. - The main character doesn't trust his party, so he doesn't upgrade his stats to show of his strength. A few chapters after stating this, he immediately fights ten+ monsters all on his own. (They are more powerful than humans)- Main character stocks up on stat points for no reason. You cannot add stat points while in combat as it would disrupt your attention. This happens over and over. He decided to attack a group of bandits with average-ish stats (2 - 4 points in each stat) while having 20+ points that aren't allocated. - Main character fights some random chick with red hair that has a katana. After making her surrender, the main character asks for her katana. She gets a new weapon before giving it to them. Main character for some reason accepts this stupid arrangement. Then, the main character, despite literally being able to see the future, lets her take one of his companions hostage. Theres more, but I can't be asked to write about this completely illogical story. (1/5 stars)Character design. It's meh. Side characters are rather useless, not sure why the main character decided to take them in. After all, part of the title is "loner in the apocalypse". Aside from that, the main character is exceedingly stupid. Nothing he does makes sense. He accepts people he doesn't trust into his group, including people who have every reason to kill him. He decides to hide his strength, before choosing to randomly show it off a few chapters later, etc. (2/5 stars)World background is a solid 3/5. I have only read eighteen chapters so I can't say a whole lot. There isn't a terrible amount of world-building, but the amount of content before the apocalypse was rather lackluster. Not much to say here. (3/5 stars)Overall, I feel like the novel would've been much better if the author went through his novel for the ridiculous amount of plot holes. I feel like the author didn't really have a plan. I give this novel 3 out of 5 stars.

It could have been a great story but the author changes the mc to make it drag on longer, also simply. So the was the girl he could not implant the seed of the mind he did not her the first time, I understand why he did not kill her that time. But the next time is straight up simping if you can't control it, he should kill and take the power, instead of manipulating remotely simping. The are other problems what about all the demon powers and spells, they are only skills and weapons and tiles. You might erase what makes demons supreme. then the is the mentality of paying people back.So in total lots of potential if done correctly, but wasn't simping galore and erasing what makes a demon a demon.

This book is so friggin interesting....why am I just seeing it now, lol..I read the first chapter and I got hooked, thanks for the work author..

One of the best cultivation novels here. It has depth, the characters are great, and there was so much plot in just sixty chapters. Highly recommend to every ***** reader