The Hidden Path of the Celestial Heart

Magnificent ✨ Please keep on going! ✨✨✨✨

Author I hope you read this.My true rating is 4.4 but I saw your pitiful overall rating so i decided to improve it a little. It is a good dungeon novel but not enough to be on the top. I think your fighting scene is too long and sometimes you took atleast 10 chapters for just a mini boss fight to conclude. One more thing, I don't particularly like your dungeon set up, it's chaotic and there is no order and logical reasoning on it, Like glaze to forest to interior of the caste? to interior of the castle? to an Ice cavern? last one, your dungeon is already in the cold environment and then the theme of your dungeon is still cold. And I know that Niflheim is on the title but dude, make it warmer. Imagine, you can find a warm place in the coldest place/continent which is the dungeon. It will lure more adventurer for its uniquenes, relative to the environment. If you know Danmachi you can get my point.Remember, a dungeon novel is a sandbox novel, so make a world.Good Luck. I'am writing and giving reviews so I can improve my english. So pls rate my english.

Amazing novel, I want to give a power stone for this beautiful thoughts.                                                         .                                                                              .     

All I have to say about this story, the book captivates with its rich character development and intriguing themes of fate and choice. The interplay between Eli and Smith creates emotional depth,  well that my thoughts on it. Keep writing.

one of my favorites keep up the good work my guy

Hello there! Giving my second novel a three and letting the readers decide to raise the rating. Anyway, I'm happy to hear your comments and suggestions. Have fun reading!