comeeee backkkkkkkkk, for basketball novels there aint much better than this smh. Well others are like KnB, this one though seems fairly reasonable. Like it's still somewhat realistic compared to others where you cant miss shots or something
So I am making this review for new readers.So mc had 7 disciples, I have read something like this before it’s the same old story repeated over and over. No it’s not the same. Oho mc possessed a body now he is going back to the clan and beat everyone. That’s same as all the story now Days. No, it’s not reincarnation or regression. All I am saying is just give this book a chance. After reading the synopsis you will feels like this is same as old over and over repeated plot. But inside is not the same. Just read 15 chapter you will find the difference thank you.
This story has a unique beginning, MC background is, unlike any other novel MC who has a good start, starts from letterly zero.Orphan, no cultivation AT ALL, no knowledge on how to advance and get stronger. With only 1 thought he had, he start a long journey as a mortal to travel from his village to a 3rd rate sect that basically accept trash people and mortals as long as they pay.thats where he starts his martial journey, and boy, so far the storyline is great!
the story started off very good but at some point the author started to deviate in many points before concluding them. it's interesting to add a plot so that it's not all easy and follow a straight line of development, however adding too many detours can get a little tiring.I also think that at times it is not necessary to have such a long description of some things at that moment, you can approach them little by little in a natural way and fluid so that it doesn't become a dictionary.even so, I thank you for the book, I write this review so that in future moments you can have an inspiration or something as you follow the course of the book. I don't want to discourage you, offend you or anything like that, I just wanted to give you constructive criticism and my personal opinion on some points. hope you keep taking this novel forward. good job, author. 😁
Hello there! Truedawn here. This novel is pretty much a reboot of one of my old novels (which I've unfortunately put under indefinite hiatus due to various personal reasons back then). Anyways, this time around, I won't stop writing this novel, and I hope all of you support it.Here's a TL;DR of the story's beginning:man diesman revivesman is actually mosquitoman becomes hungryman sucks bloodman gets systemAnd then, the story continues from there. I seriously hope you enjoy!
Beginning is exciting and I'd like to see how the story will develop. I especially like the heroine, she is smart and strong. So long there was ni brain dead characters.
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