the most amazing story which was written so well that I cried and cried in many parts of it the way the author described the depth of their feelings and gave importance to each soul and different views are awesome I don't want to be a spoiler but the scean when angelica lost her child I was crying.
this book is really good bro, please update some more. This is genuinely the only good basketball online novel I have ever read. You got some serious talent.
This could easily be in the top 20 on this site if it had an editor. The plot is well formed, as far as I have read, and the characters are interesting. Still, English is obviously not the first language of the author. There are a significant amount of extremely common mistakes such as using the wrong words, getting plurals wrong, incorrect sentence structures, missing words, missing commas, run on sentences, incorrect tense, etc...It also doesn't help that the cover implies some sort of multiple personality story and synopsis doesn't really explain anything. Overall this is a good read assuming you can ignore the quality of the prose itself.
I really loved the beginning, the mc was cold, had a special background and wasn't stupid but then everything began to become sh*t when the shameless bunch appeared, they are extremely annoying:-first they just tried to kill him and steal his game. ->then mc just forgave them for no valid reason.-then they followed him and invited themselves at his home. ->mc again forgave them for no valid reason -then they were bold enough to look into his private stuff (while knowing his personnality). ->mc again forgave them for no valid reason-he tries to work but gets interrupted again ->but still forgave them for no valid reason Also the most annoying girl magically falls in love with the mc while having known him for less than a week. In the beginning you feel like mc's coldness and ruthless personnality is legitimate but then he just lets the shameless bunch do what they want and constantly gets pushed around by their behaviour and requests, while having massacred the kids who tried to kill him he tolerates worse people for longer for no reson, he is totally illogical, the plot feels too forced because of all of the inconsistencies in this story and it becomes total sh*t after that because of the annoying bunch.It just becomes too frustrating to read this when you see the mc getting pushed around by shameless people and not do anything to them while still agreeing to their shameless requests.Many will drop this like me because of this part of the story. It began real good but became total sh*t because of only 5 chapters.
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