The Heiress Returns

A story with an interesting story arc with a dark and depressing undertone in it.Jason is an interesting protagonist to read, his backstory was dark and compelling but he kinda gave me that ‘guy-who-always-gets-the-ladies’ vibes. Jason has a personality, which some writers tend to forget to add. Alina took me a while to like, it’s probably because I found her POV a bit cliché but like Jason, she has personality and quirks. I’m actually curious if this is Harem or not, I lost count re-checking the tags just to see if it was a harem. The side characters were decent, I like how Michelle has a great personality, and usually, some writers ignore the side characters and don’t even bother making them real and relatable.I love the world-building, the writer took the time to make the story tangible and real. It was exciting and it made me want to ask for more. I was curious how the world works and I love every minute of it. The story does feel like a manuscript (especially reading Alina’s POV), it felt like I was reading a script. There were more dialogues than paragraphs. There were some parts it kind of feel like cheesy but I didn’t mind at all. The story is full of flashbacks, it sucks that Webnovel doesn’t have formatting styles here because I got confused when suddenly I’m reading a backstory without any warning. Some chapters were short, so it kind of threw me off, the story does have that ‘anime’ ambiance to it. I could visualize some scenes especially when it comes to reading Jason’s POV, which I’m totally happy about it since my mind usually takes a while to see the story. I love your cover! But I’m a graphic designer 𝐚𝐧𝐝 a font hoe. I couldn’t help myself but suggest, using a serif font because it makes the cover more elegant, serious, and formal. Condensed serif font would work. If you want I could suggest some fonts to use.Overall, this story is worth reading especially, if the reader is into anime and urban fantasy with immersive story arc.

I liked the story , the MC has a very human development , his lines are not robotic , it seems that the titles are duplicated , I do not know if it 's just for me , but apart from the little post of chapters the rest is very good , it reminded me of world war 1 the bottom of the world keep up the hard work

I'm annoyed that I'm only reading it now. But that's okay, a little behind but I can still enjoy the reading. Cool, carry on! Cheers, here we are waiting for the newest part

Chen Linyun cleared his throat.  "*Ehem* *Ehem* Is there something on my face?"  His face was tomato-red again.  He would never have predicted how his woman would act around him.

yu yan expressions changes, she calls alice.

"GOTCHA!" I added her on Facebook and sent her a message.

Some animals ran about in haste. She even saw a little antelope.

Yubikita suru yo kimi no memorii ni