THE HEAVENS SHALL BLEED

haven't finished yet, but it's a great book so far!

I really like how you took inspiration from overgeard and put your own spin on it.                                                                                         Very fun read

this is the most boring book that I have read in webnovel.Maybe like his/her story the writer is checking if the readers can hold until the end.1- too many theory explanations about everything. 2- is like reading a test book. 3- I can not find a point that was entertaining

I got as far as chapter 11 I know it might be too few chapters before judging, but I doubt it.Three main issue1)Too simple2) Too convenient3)Too fast-paced.within 10 chapters, he reaches the 4th realm of cultivation for this world, finds a disciple, and kills all bandits who are at the 2nd realm of this worlds cultivation, helps a city lord from an invasion in which a demonic cultivator of the 3rd realm of cultivation helps said people invading and then while fishing stumble upon the strongest sect master in the country of which the mc than joins said sect all within 10 chapters, chapters are average in length.Chapter 11 is what killed it for me, I know the system was going to make it easy for the mc but this way too easy all he does is check in every day and it gives him random stuff.Good points-writing is alright some words and grammar here and there needs work but it's very readable.-characters are the strong point of this story the mc is actually fun to read,  his little disciple is as well, and their interactions are fun. Even the talking system is cool I know most find them annoying and with good reason, but his system seems to be a cool bro and not a jerk.

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Hi author here with a shameless review.I want to say several things, so let's go slowly.About the writing quality, I'm going to be honest here, it's not the best and isn't near since I'm not that good at English, but I'm trying, so bear with it until either I get better or I can pay a grammar checker.The story development, I'm trying to make it slow, not too much, but slow, so I don't know how that will end.The character design, it gets better (I think) around the chapter 11, so if you can pass the first ones, it will improve (a little, don't know in the future how it will be).The updating stability, I'm gonna be straight honest, it's awful. Since I'm a student with a quite strict school, I have lots of exams, so I have to study, and also this is a hobby, so I have other priorities. If you can understand that, I thank you, if you can't, I can't do nothing about it.And finally, the world background, there isn't too much right now, and probably it won't be too complex in the future, since I'm very clueless.If after all that negative things I said about my book (I now realize this doesn't help at all) you still want to read it and actually read it, I welcome you to this adventure that I don't know where will take us.(Pss, also join the discord, so we can chat and hear me ramble.)

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away from him. Not fast enough, she tripped over a branch and fell down. The hunt had ended