The Heartthrob Alpha Doesn't Want to Counterattack [Quick Transmigration]

              Zemin Yan turned slightly and smiled accepting his thanks, but soon he went to the bathroom to take a shower, leaving Zhong Liang alone in the living room with the little Sying.

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Nice one buddy love the novel keep it up but it must be very words glowing before web novel can verify your novel, keep your good works I can't wait to read new chapters

what can i say? i enjoyed the story so far. interesting background, power system, enjoyable dialogues and well, knights, swords, hordes and battles! so, all in all, quite good. looking forward to how the story progresses.one suggestion though; try to change the way people speak a little. for example, nobles could speak in a more sophisticated manner compared to knights and commoners, yknow by not shortening the words with apostrophes but writing the words out, something that the snobby elite also do in our world😁. for commoners, a smidge of broken english or making them use more shortened words like comin' etc. And for knights something in between. it would give your story a new level of divide between nobles that were trained from birth on how to behave and present themselves properly and the commoners who weren't trained in the ways of pompous mannerism. just a thought.

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?

I can't wait to see where this one goes.I greatly liked your prior novels, and I think I ill like this one too. over all let's get this started