The Heart Of Dominance (OLD)

  • Genre： Action
  • Author： CalmDaoistLee
  • Translator：
  • Status： Ongoing

  • Rating(4.3 / 5.0) ★

*Thump, Thump, Thump*


"This power that is inside me, it is not of my creation! I reject it and I reject you!"


{Foolish boy, you claim it is not of your creation; yet the body you walk in isn't of your creation either, and yet you claim that!}


"My mother gave me this body as a gift, however, you are a leech!"


{Leeches suck the blood out of you, where else I am your very blood, I flow through your veins foolish boy; your mother is the one who gave me to you!}






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  1. Stephanie Burns
    Stephanie Burns rated it
    The start is dynamic and attractive, while usually, the norm is to write in the past tense author had chosen to use present but it's not a bad thing per se.

    Character design is unique and genuine in my opinion.
    there is no information dumping and the story flows appropriately which is good.

    Updates are stable enough that readers don't have to wait.

    the only flaw I found in the narration is that it is tough to read conversations because there is no gap between them and it leads to confusion about who is saying what and which part is said and which part is not.

    I think it can be corrected easily so it's not a big issue.
    good luck for the author.
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  1. Genevieve Morse
    Genevieve Morse rated it
    Very good story! Is very intriguing and has a very good start. I don't particularly like that it's written in present tense for the most part, but I got used to it. It does have a few Grammer errors though.
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  1. Werner Gus
    Werner Gus rated it
    Good story don't know what else to say I rarely do reviews gggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
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  1. Fabian Harvey
    Fabian Harvey rated it
    Writing Quality: A decent amount of grammar errors but understandable. Story is good enough to overlook

    Stability: Seems fine

    Story: Very interesting so far and unique

    Design: Kid is cute and hopefully spelling mc donalds on the first chapter wrong was how the kid pronounced it because it was funny and cute

    Background: not sure yet
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  1. Iris London
    Iris London rated it
    The author expressed concern about novels that don't explain their magical systems very well, and I am fully in agreement. However, this guy isn't just talk. He actually followed through with his criticisms and explain how magic actually worked properly! Therefore, I think that this deserves a read, if only for the properly explained magic system!
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  1. Cara Galbraith
    Cara Galbraith rated it
    I liked this one. It is a work that successfully blended fantasy and drama. Poor Inut, he deserves more than this in my opinion but it is the author's choice, respect :)
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  1. Odelette Conan
    Odelette Conan rated it
    Overall, this is quite an enjoyable read. The writing is understandable although there are rare instances where there are mistakes. The story develops at a nice rate and the character design is pretty good as well. I personally, don't like having to read about all the races at the beginning, but that's just me. Overall, its a great novel and keep doing you thing it seems like its gonna work out for you.
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  1. Keith Bunyan
    Keith Bunyan rated it
    A good storyline, the characters are fascinating to an extent that grabs the readers attention. A beautiful picture is created through these words. Overall a nice novel.
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