Hi I just finished reading all the chapters that you posted and you left me wanting more and more ! so when I realize that such masterpiece didnβt have a review I was shocked! So Iβm here to show my appreciation to your work ! Please continue with your hard work ! That being said... Writing Quality: itβs pretty good, I didnβt notice any big mistakes in your grammar. For me it was very fluid, I read all 40 chapters in one go and I never felt tired ! I enjoyed reading it and thatβs the most important thing for me. Updating Stability: I can't say much about it, so Iβll trust you and give you 5 stars. Please continue to update frequently! Story Development: I say itβs a good rhythm, not so slow but not so fast, until now you pretty much followed the original rhythm of the manga which is good for me. Although I felt like the MC should do more physical training, like sparing with tang or something like that, for what you write it seems that he just do some heavy work out and meditate but that alone doesnβt give him experience on real battle. Until now that wasnβt a problem because he never encountered anyone who was stronger than him in real fight ( Iβm not counting the exam to enter Shrek Academy, because if the professor had take it seriously, Joy would lose ). Other than that I notice that the MC try hard to not change the original events, which I can understand, but that can become very boring in the future, until now thatβs not a problem because it still just in the beginning of the plot. Overall Iβm loving it ! Character Design: I have nothing to say about it, l pretty much see him as Aizen before betraying Soul Society, I didnβt paid too much attention to his description so I canβt say much, Iβm sorry ! World Background: I recently started reading Doulou Dalu, I didnβt finished so I can say much. However I thought it was clever the idea of using the infinity stones as material soul ! MCU itβs not my forte, although I watched the movies I was never a die hard fan of the comics. For now thatβs all I can give you, Iβll do another review in the future. I hope it was helpful!Iβm sorry I canβt give you a more detailed review, Iβm usually to shy to Write anything, this is my first review ever T^T Obs: please take in consideration that English itβs not my native language so I apologize for any mistakes
one of my new favorites still nothing tops birth of the demonic sword yet but this one and walker amongst worlds is another that comes very very close to it
This is unreadable. It is genuinely worse than MTL. Imagine reading an MTL where someone edits half the names to the first thing that comes to their mind. Then you have scratched the service of how bad it is. I have no idea how anyone can read this without losing their minds.
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