The Genesis of Stars

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Thank you for reading my book. It's my first novel, and I'm still learning, so I give four stars! Here's what you can expect:The GoodThe story flows well, and grammar and sentence issues are minimal.Otto, the MC, is smart, ruthless, pragmatic, rational, and powerful. He loves his schemes, but is NOT a genius, an edge lord, a simp, or omnipotent.Each floor could lead to an entirely new world! The worlds are unique, and feel real...this is not a copy cat novel heheThe BadPacing! It starts fast but slows down too much...something to work onNo romance...POV shifts could be introduced and inserted better.There are moments where it may seem contrived...this is my first story so I'm working on this tooAll in all, I hope you can give it a chance.... I don't think you'll regret it!!!

Very good one of the best i have read in a very long time i hope this doesn't get dropped and has a lot more chapters it is to good to be dropped

Story plot is good Not rush Op mc With its struggles Good suddle comedy 🎭 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲

Hey!Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.

This book is amazing! I love evry single detail in it. The way that the story just flows isn’t choppy and since it’s not choppy I love it. And you don’t really get straight to the point you just lead up to it which makes me want to read even more.Overall this book is just 100/100 it’s just amazing! 🤩🤩🤩

A unique story line and great character design. the development of how the story goes kept getting better and better. recommend 💯 . great job author 👍