Writing Quality: It's too good to be true. The grammars are good too. It had a very detailed information at the same time it won't make you feel bored at all. Story Development: The main story line development have a good pace (not too slow and not too fast). Well except for the Romantic relationship of the MC, its too fast I guess. But overall the story development is good.Character Design: I say the characters are too normal but its not that bad considering the story is still young. I'm looking forward to the Character development especially the MCUpdating Stability: Its alright and its understandable considering the situation of the author. World Background: This has a lot of potential.Overall: The story is great and I'll support it. ps. sorry I'm not that good in writing a review.
Story is very interesting with no unnecessary stuff, I recommend to people read this onceMC is down to earth not arrogant. Not much picture of Female lead.
The story line has been great so far, with diverse characters, great world background, along with many secrets not revealed, which will be known along the way. Don’t let the first few chapters discourage you, the story gets better as it progresses. The updating speed is quite slow, faster updates might give it a better ranking.
This is my first original novel, I will be improving the content of the chapters as I write the novel. The more active you are, the more chapters I will publish. I hope you enjoy it!
Hello, I am fellow reader passing by. just saw came. I enjoyed this very first chapter. I know it's too early for a review. But came here to comment about this. Since still there is only one chap, I am not capable of describing the plot. Yet, Enjoyable. So I think the author will understand and don't get mad at me for this not well reviewed,review. 💛
When Link reached 50, I decided to make my move. I walked towards him (I was watching from a distance), and when he saw me, he stopped and got up. He wasn't even breathing hard! How?!
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