The Eternal Sketch

It's going to be a tough one. Anyways, let's keep reading...

I really like it,  because i love baseball but because i love story.                                                                              

The thing is I don’t understand how in a place filled with magic a mother could die of childbirth. Truth be told when I first started reading this novel I thought it was a normal medieval theme novel so I didn’t think much of a mother dying of childbirth, but as the story keeps going on the grandma started showing magical means and medical pills etc. I find it hard to believe that the grandma fails to prepare to bring pill and magical medicine for her precious daughter in case things go wrong with the childbirth. And we still haven’t gotten a reasonable explanation about this topic. For this major plot hole this novel is a major failure.

Im giving this 5* just because I saw the words "A record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality". I cant wait to see this out if trial reads and into the sea of books Im reading daily 😍😍

Just a standard wuxia story but the mc reincarnated 1000 years before his death so no clue when he’s gonna find his enemy’s. In just the second chapter he already is rescuing a beautiful girl saving her brother and dodging bullets

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A fun take on the cultivation novel. As of Chapter 8, the MC has come to an understanding of his new situation, and is nearing the strength of a human. No combat to date, but I know how hard it can be to kill a mosquito!

Simple yet engaging to many readers (especially otakus, hey there! 😄😜).. As a reader who is an otaku, it actually suits my tastes. I hope in the next chapter it would be in a third person's view so that it wouldn't be too confusing for some readers. Because the more you keep on shifting each character's POVs, some would tend to lose interest because it is quite confusing. I hope that you could add up some more spice with the world background. I hope this review isnt too offensive... 😰🙏 I am just giving a few suggestions. I really like the story so I just hope that you would reconsider if ever :)If you want it first POV, please do use some more sensual words to let people imagine what kind of world you are putting your character into.... Thats all thank you! I hope you dont find this review offensive 😭