The story has a great concept, but the writing and characters fall short. The execution lacks depth and fails to bring the idea to its full potential, resulting in a mediocre experience despite the promising premise.
Only after the youth had taken out 23 Class 1 Monster Cores did he finally stop. He calmly looked at the inspecting elder taking notes, and said, "Teacher, these are the monster cores I retrieved."
When the beast is almost near them, he used his agility in avoiding it's attack and just continue running forward. The beast chase them like crazy. Leng just hug his brother tightly in the back and hide his face in his brother's back because of terror.
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