the echo's of our hearts

The plot is very interesting and a bit tragic too. The characters have potential for intricate relationships which is exciting. Def a good read so far.

They refer themselves as Romans and the Roman Empire not byzantine or byzantium so to make it more accurate use those words. but anyways i give this 4.6 Star : )

"Okay! We won't back down either! Use headbutt" said Lawrence

"That is a good gene, but there are other strength type genes aside from that, much better in fact." He pointed.

"You weren't kidding." He wiped his mouth and approached again, more cautious. Arthur's hand went back down to eye level, but his sides were still exposed. The warrior immediately went for a left hook and connected, but before he could pull back, Arthur's elbow shot down and pinned his fist there. Arthur then wrapped his arm around to his elbow and and twisted his arm. The warrior was forced to bend over into a painful position. Arthur then took his right hand and uppercut with all his strength. The warrior's jaw snapped audibly as went flying into the air by 2 feet. While he was still in the air, Arthur kneed him in the stomach, forcing blood out of the warrior's mouth. Arthur then used the force of his body to spin in a circle and slam him into the ground. A few ribs broke on impact, and his head was spinning with pain, but Arthur had no mercy. Arthur proceeded to jump and stomp his ribs, breaking almost all that were left. The warrior lost his breath and sputtered blood everywhere.

" Yamanaka Secret Technique: Information Overload!"

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[B] Alone Standing- EerR -Standing Alone i thought to myself, i Picked God of Fire- cuz i am one Irl