I could not help but be a bit disappointed by this novel. It felt so good at first, but I could not help but notice that he feels like a complete noob at times, when he was supposed to be a pro who survived until the end. I also could not help but notice that in the first chapter, it was mentioned that he could rememeber anything if he just focused on it. I could not help but notice that he seemed oblivious to things that he should rememeber, or atleast have an idea of. An example being when he retrieved the pain relief pills through the menu. He was shocked they materialized infront of him, when after literal years of gameplay, he should have known that would happen for NPC’s.I could not help but notice that the technology tree seems highly limiting.
Ok, I really like the start and I hate it from the moment it enters the Arena City.The story between Eve and him was perfect, but like any other novel (unfortunately) something serious must have happened to her (too cliché).After that, several point that disappoint me.- At the beginning a discussion with Eve that Stella was his and that it didn't bother Eve that he has other girls, but that totally changes some chapter later- He goes back to see Pengu later, but in no case goes to see Stella? or the first "toy" and future sect leader? one of the moments that started making me stop reading the novel- The death of Lucia (or Lucie?) (The Inn girl) and yeah a toy too.- Abandon Helia, for whom he was starting to have feelings.- What happenned to Katia and Elea?- Ok, there’s the problem with his soul, but frankly it becomes nonsense extract Eve's soul by ejaculating in a powerful woman, lol?- No more 18+ scenes for a while, ok, he only likes and wants Eve, but change the name of the Novel then!- "Smut Romance with THEIR Girlfriends, but after 500 chapters he still have one.
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Starting was great, read it all.Good enough that made me read the mtlNgl, it's gonna be a harem, too much female characters.Only 2 male side character that, gets the most screen time.1)A male lich that he made into his subordinates2)leprechaun that does housework and constructionAside from them, it's all female. .. ..
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