Seems good so far, We could use more detail on what the world and characters feels/looks like as it breaths. Some writing mistakes are prevalent, but nothing major.
Team Callian all the way! I loved the story right from the start. The author has ensured that she cut through lengthy descriptions and has got straight to the action and lots of interesting drama. I loved the chemistry between Eira and Callian. It seems Callian has fallen for Eira already. Hoping that she realizes it soon 😉 Great story! Waiting for the updates.
It's a very good novel and for a long time I want to see an author that can blend incantation and juju practice into a novel. Although this novel didn't do much justice to the character the world building is the best I have seen on this site.
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