The Chronicles of Maldoria

very good writing, the main character is interesting and not deplorable. the world is also complete and thought out, though the money thing is very questionable.

I READ THIS BEFORE BUT I FORGOT THE TITLE (AHHRGG SOOOO ANNOYING)

with experience of reading books for like 50 years nowi am so sorry to say that in my opinion the pick up novel this weekthe 25 september. is very poor,  this novel's don't have any tastewhat so ever.and i am sorry to say that in my opinion also the new selection in the trailthis week also not so good in my eyes.remember i read book even before the internet.and there is still a few novels here that is very good 2

Your story lacks correct mentioning of levels(sorry its rather very confusing). A very low update rate but that is not something to be commended here i am a bit disappointed that i don't get to read many chapters. hope that there will be a change on that sooner. Either way just don't stop.

Star wars +Xi'an Xia= best sifi novelNerd +will of a devil  = Meng he Broad detailed world + amazing character development + new cultivation system ,= MUST READ

TL:DRTerrible grammar, inconsistent writing, and generally super cringy novel.Honestly, Extra Chapter 0 from Supreme Magus is a chapter pointing out cliches in novels, and this entire novel is basically the same as this one chapter.Mc kills " a powerful person"s son, goes on the run with a girl, she dies, he becomes "an assassin" that can supposedly dodge bullets, then goes on to get revenge and murder the entire family of the dead kid, including the employees working for them.Mc dies, travels back in time and starts playing a "VRMMO" in which he gets OP stats. Two(?) days after release there are already " experts" in the game or w/e. The game has time dilation so two days in are one day IRL. Then we get told that there is a limit of 10 hours playing in the game as well, to stop no-lifers.Mc wants to be with his waifu and he "meets" her again in a gym, where he proceeds to save her by punching a guy and knocking out his mate, which makes him fly 3 meters back and falls unconscious. His grill immediately leaves the gym so he "gives them another quick beating" before running outside after her. In the span of a couple of minutes(?) he beats these guys twice, they call their "powerful uncle (or w/e)" and he beats them again.

I enjoyed reading this. I read the entire thing in one sitting up to the latest chapter. I love the character, I especially like that he is intelligent, his attitude makes me like him, Seujoon is a perfect example of a character that you cannot hate. There is also how it is kind of similar to The Legendary Mechanic in that the MC becomes an NPC but he still lives in reality. Overall, I love it. I hope you keep up the great stuff!

Very entertaining but lacking In chapters, that is all i have to say.🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂