The Chronicle of Aurelia Aurelius

Not bad dear. Good work. I hope one day I'll write like you.

Where is Daughters of the Moon Goddess?

I've read up to chapter 227. I'm pretty mixed regarding this novel. It's a decent shounen-esque light novel with emphasis on world-development and character design. I will give the author this, the characters are really good, albeit not the best I've seen in novels but far superior than your average light novel. The world background/design is also amazing, I don't think I've seen a novel similar to this where I know more than four countries in a reasonable timeframe. The story development is a solid 2/5. This is mostly because I can't help but notice that for a huge portion of the novel, the main character is almost always embroiled in a fight with people one or two major realms above him. This, provided with the authors habit of making the main character fight against a conspiracy, plot to harm a lot of people, or similar things in every single place he goes annoys me quite a bit. I think this is actually worse than when a main character kills a young master, fights his father, then his grandfather, then his great grandfather, a patriarch (etc) in cultivation novels. This pacing ruins the novel in my opinion.On another note, this is just a personal gripe of mine and is purely subjective, but I find it incredibly annoying in cultivation novels similar to this where the main character gains power specifically to protect his little sister or family in general, and then I have to watch as the author makes those characters completely irrelevant for the entire story. This is mostly due to the fact that it's not only predictable, but it happens in every single novel similar to this without fail.Overall, it's a good novel, I think the author needs to work on the pacing a bit more, correct the common grammatical mistakes, and tone down some of the long-winded descriptions, but other than that it's a worthwhile read.