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  1. FaithAlbert7019
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    "This is an entertaining novel that's definitely worth reading. It stands out from typical cultivation-themed works because the protagonist isn't overpowered (OP) and doesn't rely on clichéd harem dynamics. He's a thoughtful character who makes well-informed decisions."
  1. KiritoK5
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    "Give it a shot. The protagonist, MC, is portrayed as intelligent and not your typical dense, beta character when it comes to relationships. He's not a pushover either. Since I'm not fond of stories focusing on cultivation, I can't comment on that aspect. The plot revolves around MC rescuing his sister and saving the world, despite her eventual transformation into a phoenix. Although she isn't overly powerful, they face challenges consistently throughout the story. The real strength lies in MC's ability to recall game elements and devise strategies, which aren't always successful but require improvisation, making for an engaging narrative. In terms of relationships, the character development is well done, with a gradual pace that avoids rushing or melodrama. Each relationship issue is handled with reasonable solutions and logical arguments."
  1. juan_jose_7953
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    The storyline deserves a solid 4 or 5 stars, but granting it a full 5-star rating wouldn't be unjust. The main character is a die-hard fantasy enthusiast with an honorable code; despite being tempted by several attractive women, he remains loyal to his love, which is endearing, considering he's around 16 in the narrative (slight spoiler, but who cares).

    However, like many novels, one potential drawback is the主角's charm, allowing him to attract nearly everyone due to his authentic self. At times, he might seem invulnerable to challenges, which could be seen as plot armor. Nevertheless, overall, it's an enjoyable read for passing the time.
  1. Frost16
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    It starts off strong, entertaining, and engaging. However, after some time, it becomes ridiculous as the main character (MC) acquires an extraordinary ability to attract girls, and every situation unfolds predictably according to his plans. A spoiler follows:

    He ends up sleeping in the same bed with his supposed "sister," but it's solely for medical purposes to alleviate his "yang deficiency."
  1. Author2189
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    So far, it's been quite amusing without any groundbreaking moments. I appreciate its simplicity. It often follows a predictable pattern where the ensemble seems to share one collective intellect. Our main character is considered skilled within his local context, yet his sister, the protagonist, stands out as a global talent. Consequently, he frequently resorts to clever tactics to navigate challenges. And seriously, this series needs to be labeled as a 'harem' – there's already a girl pursuing him, and he even runs a establishment that elicits intimate sounds, suggesting an illicit side to it.
  1. Cultured_Daoist69
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    Your interpretation of reincarnation is truly refreshing. The main character doesn't pursue any predestined "treasure meant for the protagonist," and the supporting characters aren't one-dimensional, intelligent but gullible towards the protagonist. Each problem-solving approach is both innovative and humorous. Rating: 4.7 out of 5, highly recommended.
  1. SpiritImmortalFcA
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    "So far, this has been a delightful and lighthearted experience. It's absurd and over-the-top, but incredibly entertaining. I would love to see more protagonist characters who are less formidable."
  1. Deeznuts8999
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    This novel stands out due to its excellent writing and captivating storyline, adorned with an intriguing array of dynamic characters. What impresses me particularly is the author's skill in vividly portraying each scene through the characters' actions. They don't fade into the background when not central; instead, their personalities come to life with every move they make. Although the characters may not be overly complex, they are undeniably well-developed, bringing a sense of realism and vitality to the narrative.

    The only area where the book falls short, in my opinion, is its world-building. It follows a typical Chinese cultivation genre structure, with a familiar power hierarchy, lacking any particularly innovative or distinctive elements. Overall, it's a strong read, but it could have benefited from a more immersive and original setting.
  1. DemiurgeOhara
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    In an earnest and genuine manner, the story is exceptionally well-crafted according to the standards of Chinese cultivation novels. The protagonist, FML (an abbreviation likely referring to the main character), showcases impressive character growth. He exhibits emotional intelligence and consistently outmaneuvers others, making him a strong and relatable "Chad" figure. Despite momentarily overlooking his younger sister's romantic feelings due to their sibling dynamic, he remains assertive and sets boundaries with potential admirers, even by directly addressing them.

    The title may be misleading, but the narrative focuses on the protagonist's wit and strategic thinking, both in defeating enemies and manipulating alliances for his advantage. The plot stands out positively, avoiding common tropes of mass murder driven by superficial judgments. Instead, the MC employs calculated tactics, sometimes enlisting others to handle threats, which adds depth to his character. His self-awareness and ability to leverage his strengths make for an engaging read. I would confidently rate this a solid 4.8.
  1. Jackson_0005
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    It was decent, much better than many reincarnation cultivation stories I've come across. However, that comparison isn't particularly meaningful given the low standards of the genre. I actually enjoyed the protagonist this time around. Unlike those overly contrived main characters who blindly follow the plotlines, regardless of the consequences, he actively sought favorable positions in the various narratives he became involved in. As long as he emerged victorious and everything fell within his calculations, he didn't mind minor deviations from the original story.

    But my admiration for the MC took a nosedive when he met a specific character. In Chapter 368, when he encountered Xu Xiyue, a problem surfaced. To clarify, the MC had reincarnated into a fantasy cultivation game he had played before, knowing full well that his original character was destined to be cannon fodder. Back then, in the game, he was infatuated with an NPC named Xu Xiyue, a server in the West's Cold Sky Province. He even referred to her as his wife, which wasn't a major issue initially.

    However, the issue arises when they finally meet in the book, as she's a mere 12-year-old girl while he's an adult. Normally, a person would move on and accept that it's not meant to be, but our MC intensifies his interest, stalking her creepily, attempting to teach her cultivation techniques to win her affection, and even invading her privacy by entering her room during her sleep to transfer energy and read her diary. The worst part? He even proposes to her before leaving, revealing that his visit to the Cold Sky Province was partly for her, and he's even bribing her with cultivation knowledge just to impress her. This whole situation raises serious concerns about grooming, especially considering none of the other girls seem bothered by his behavior. Xiao Yunluo briefly mentions her age, but it's quickly dismissed, almost as if it's not a big deal.

    Despite this particular subplot, I have no personal complaints about the story otherwise. It's a harem tale, so there are multiple female characters, and none of them are overly annoying, except perhaps Xiao Yunluo with her constant attempts to conceal her emotions. Feng Yu Die, for instance, is fine too. Among the reincarnated Chinese cultivation novels I've read, this one stands out as one of the better ones.
  1. Gorloww
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    The narrative was quite enjoyable. In terms of plot, it's familiar territory, but the characters stood out due to their likability. Each character had distinct traits that set them apart from one another. The story could have been derailed by common issues in cultivation or harem novels, such as sudden character transformations, hypocrisy, cookie-cutter characters, and repetitive storylines. However, these aspects were handled well so far.

    The main character (MC) demonstrated maturity, avoiding typical immature desires often seen in transmigrated individuals. He wasn't indiscriminately attracted to everyone and openly rejected romantic advances, maintaining clear goals. A cliché often found in cultivation novels - the MC needing to 'cure' a female lead (FL) through intimacy due to moral or emotional obstacles - was reimagined tastefully. Instead of forcing a sexual encounter, the MC discovered a need for a cultivation partner to balance his yang techniques, which led to a more subtle dynamic where he received Yin energy from his adoptive sister without crossing the line into inappropriate behavior.

    The novel provided humorous moments and added depth to the relationships, particularly within the harem and romantic context, without resorting to clichéd or offensive elements. The only aspect that could be considered tasteless was treating the FL's original-world sexuality as a comedic ailment, suggesting it needed to be "cured" or fixed, which I found problematic. Overall, the novel maintained a refreshing approach to these common tropes.
  1. NiklasKniest
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    This tale has its appealing aspects, but unfortunately, it displays problematic elements. The main character's sexuality is openly gay, which unfortunately leads to constant ridicule and attempts to "correct" her. The author often treats her as a comical figure rather than a serious one. Moreover, the female characters are portrayed as intellectually inferior to both the villains and the male protagonist, serving mainly to enhance his character and justify their subservient roles around him. They're essentially pawns in his narrative, with the exception of the original protagonist, who tries to navigate their complicated dynamics.

    If you enjoyed "Ending Maker," there's a possibility that you might find something to like here, but personally, I struggle to wholeheartedly recommend it due to its prejudiced treatment of certain characters.

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