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  1. Lncea
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    I ship the Mc with the og mc
  1. Tanz3107
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    It's alright, though it has its flaws. The main character is quite clever, devising strategies for both his sister's welfare and countering his foes. He isn't afraid to utilize influential sects or his own protagonist status to achieve his goals. However, the issue lies in the disproportionate amount of intellect attributed to the MC. The protagonist is practically a fool, fixated solely on the MC's sister, who reciprocates that infatuation despite their half-sibling relationship. Their antics with other characters can range from entertaining to tedious, depending on the specific scene.
  1. DeraBlue
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    I've been pondering what exactly captivated me about this novel. The romance aspect is practically non-existent and quite unsatisfactory; it's almost like an afterthought. Initially, the introduction was harsh, yet it effectively established the main character's traits. He's practical and self-centered, but surprisingly grounded compared to many other protagonists I've encountered. Surprisingly, <span style="display:none">without giving away any spoilers:</span> there are instances where he calls out the female characters for having low self-esteem, effortlessly turning them down before they even get the chance to confess.

    While I wouldn't consider this a groundbreaking masterpiece, as a Chinese wuxia novel, this particular beginning has certainly stood out among the ones I've read. I'm hopeful that the rest of the story maintains this strong foundation.
  1. Pr0copio
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    Sir!!!!! It is a serious matter. Which chapter is it?
  1. EvinieLBp
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    From what i remember, i dont think theres any
  1. NeonSsX
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    Go read I'll surpass the mc
  1. Zamir
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    This narrative stands out due to its well-crafted protagonist who relies on meticulous planning,不同于寻常作品中的强角色。故事的主角自身较为弱势,他不仅要为自己,还要为妹妹谋篇布局。穿插在章节中的幽默诙谐元素适时地为情节增添轻松愉快的气氛。到目前为止,逻辑性保持得很好,没有突兀的情节转折或不合理的行为,整体上给人以连贯而可信的感觉。
  1. CristinaDomingos
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    Firstly, I couldn't locate a complete Chinese novel version, which hindered my ability to read it fully through Google Translate. Regrettably, I am currently on hold until the English translations catch up, as there are 388 chapters available at the moment of this review.

    The story, although not centered around an overpowered protagonist, adheres to its title, showcasing the transformation of the main character's sister, or disciple, into a powerful figure, symbolizing her rise like a phoenix. The narrative shares similarities with "Ending Maker," where the protagonist enters a game knowing its plot, utilizing that knowledge as an advantage. Our protagonist employs his game insights to manipulate events and gain benefits.

    The relationships between the main character and supporting characters are portrayed well, but occasionally, they serve as plot devices when the author faces a storytelling roadblock. To move the story forward, forced romantic subplots are employed, which can be less enjoyable to read. However, these instances are relatively minor and do not significantly detract from the overall reading experience.
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