I have read it a bit before when it was released Planning to start from the start once again. I have asked it before in an old review and will ask it again. Author-san, do you have a fetish for half- elves with red hair and green eyes??😅
One of the best books I’ve read if it continues to develope as it has it’ll be an amazing book, you don’t see much of this genre but once it is excuted it creates an amazing storey.
The story has a promising premise. Down the road, I noticed there were too many abrupt time-skips in a single chapter. While this is inevitable, please consider a time-skip once every other chapter or so if necessary and use the chance to elaborate more about characters. Settling that aside, as other had pointed out, there are grammatical errors, incorrect uses of punctuation marks and chopped sentences. I'd suggest getting an editor to help you with this issue and you could focus more on fleshing out your main plot.
Loved literally everything about this! SOOOOO GOOOD!You'd think that a story this good doesn't exist, BUT IT DOES!!!READ IT READ IT READ IT NOOOOO***WW!!!!!!
Popular Reviews