The Billionaire’s Very Sinful Bargain

high school of the dead fan fic, not an official fan fic btw, but a copy from the original with no source. in fact all of the books under the author are pirated books.

I think the story had potential but to be fair I didn't read much of it since it is only frustrating me, while he has an easy way to get stronger it is like the whole world is against him getting stronger by showering him in 'kindness' even his sister is finding a rich older man to marry so that eur mc is able to get stronger Through a lot of medicine, while i don't like the thought it it would be in another novel it is still somewhat acceptable but in this novel it is really in a complete different level since he is only able to get weaker by eating them. btw I don't know if the sister married that guy afterwards since i stopped reading it as I read the beginning of that chapter.

i don't understand and not interested in wine, there so much dialog and i'm not interested in it . wine making? . i don't no why is this novel in my recommendation.  i read it and i don't get it.  if anyone interested in this type of story then i can't judge it if it's good or not . but i really don't like it for my entertainment when some people just talking about unrelated stuff with enthusiasm . and seriously it's been in my library for quite some time and also in recommendation   , daily recommendation . i always stops at this book and think should i read it more before judging but after some time i removed it  . now it's again in my recommendation why ? ( just my rant not asking to author )

Quite frankly, this one has a lot of wasted potentialThere's a lot to improve authorThe grammer is just something enough to be rated as readable, not something I'd prefer, but still read itStory development is quite slow, though that's my personal opinion, I just don't like these kinda excruciatingly slow novelsCharacter design needs a lot of improvement, I recommend research on psychology author, your character is VERY inconsistent with what you tell him or try to portray him as, to me it seems as though you have no idea how truly prideful individuals behave and I'm not talking about ones that hide their insecurities with a layer of pride and arrogance I'm talking about truly prideful ones, they don't go around gawking at anything remotely "impressive" like your character does because to them, they themselves are more impressive than majority of stuff around them, they don't really show a lot of emotions either, you really just forget about your characters pride majority of time, that's not how that works man.World background is ok I guess, since we haven't really explored a lot in this area. My review can change in future.Tho ngl, this is pretty good if you're writing for the first time author. I hope you improve in the future.

Generally cultivation novels are boring but this one is better because mc(as the title suggest) is a harness cultivator. so, we can see that the progression of story is quite fast paced and we find new characters and their interactions with mc regularly and this makes the story readable and you can somewhat enjoy this.

AS LONG AS IT HAS ROMANCE, I AM IN! I LOVE THE SUMMARY THOUGH I WISHED IT COULD BE A LITTLE MORE DETAILED, BUT IF YOU THINK IT'S ALREADY DETAILED IT'S FINE BECAUSE A NOVEL LIES IN THE PROGRESSION OF THE STORY

Realising he could get some treasure he was quite excited. Although he saw many jewels and gold in the previous room. But for a Word novel to have a key, that means the treasure must be big.

Come out Poliwag: Ash