The Bad Boy's Girl

Writing quality 5 : well written Story Development 3  Character design 1: Mc is hyper dumb wimp... bro doesn't know who he is , what he wants , what he does 😭 World background 3: I am at 100 but I don't know enough about the world 😞 Good story but I feel like the author is not interested in doing this

I'm glad Kyle has someone like Ethan and Ethan's family who can give him the love and care he deserves. The story is very dark with lots of extreme negative thoughts, but the author is very good at writing and weaving everything together. I just want to give Kyle a big bear hug and fight off his bullies. He doesn't deserve any of this. I wonder why his family treats him that way... Looking forward to Kyle leaving behind his messed up family and just riding off into the sunset with Ethan 🥰

I initially thought this was gonna be a novel where MC is a hermit that quickly becomes overpowered then blows the minds of mortals as he casually serves it to them and oneshots all his enemies. On the contrary, this seems like an actual cultivation novel. He actually sequesters himself to cultivate or practice his skills/spells to mastery stages ect. This isn't a novel where the system is overbearing or seems to be constantly present either. It sometimes pops in to give a mission then leaves for a couple years or something. Characters are also one of this novels strong points, with them behaving as real actual humans would instead of being cardboard cutouts of that same arrogant young master, they have common sense.Not what I was expecting honestly, but seems to be very well done and has that rare quality where some actual thought was put in.in short this is a cultivation novel that has common sense, that is often more then what we can ask for these days.

"Fite me, idiots.."

"We are going back to New Moon City and from there we'll go to the Ten Thousand Beast Mountain Range. Apparently there is a Phoenix Trial grounds in that forest and I am gonna go there and get the Phoenix Bloodline." said Mesa while he was rubbing his hands together and smiling.

Yuuichi Nods and Rain says.

Dan dengan pujian, datang tepukan kepala!

_ Two days, you disappeared for two days. Where the hell were you?