All in all, a solid novel.There aren’t too many chapters so I can make a concrete review. Howver, from what I’ve read so far (30 chaps or so) I would say that it’s quite solid.The concept is fun, the dialogues are nice, and the world background is also slowly starting to take shape.That said, there are a couple of things that could improved.Firstly, not sure if it was just me, but at some point you used an emoji, and my laptop couldn’t read it, so I was confused for a bit. Could be just me, and it wasn’t really a big problem. The pacing is fine since the world is starting to take shape, so no problem there. Character is fine, but you what should be worked on more are side characters.They do feel alive, but it can be slightly improved. Just give them more unique quirks, and some motivation and goals to which they aspire to achieve.Anyhow, I really do like the story. Keep up the good work.
read up to chapter 50 raws and the nationalism gets real bad. Every country except for China is barbaric and exploits its citizens while China is perfect and the government cares only about the health of the people.
A little after our mysterious traveler left the forest shadows appeared from within the forest, stopping at the edge of the forest. They stood there mixed amongst the bushes, vines, as well as on tree branches watching as the traveler left.
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