The Assassin Hunter Stops Time

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Alyss raised her hand in the air like solemnly. "I couldn't, you've already got me something once,"

"Yes!!" masayang sigaw niya. Naiimagine ko tuloy yung mukha niyang sobrang laki ng ngiti. "Tapos na po!" pakanta niyang sabi habang papalapit sakin.

The lance character was just defending from the demon's trident attack, finding the chance while the demon steady itself, he attacked the last healthy leg of the demon with charging attack. The lance character charged at the demon like a bull, dealing multiple damage. The demon was about to attack the lance character when it's leg cracked like the other, fissures filled the leg as the demon fell down again.

I think I let this piece stay and let you all argue about it).

     "Thank you, mister!" Wyn called enthusiastically as he grabbed his bag and handed the elderly man a few coins. Unable to bear the temptation any longer, he pulled out a slice and started munching on it. The delicious taste invaded his taste buds, and he couldn't help but close his eyes blissfully as he took the first bite.

I have read upto chapter 43 and I can confidently rate this high in most aspects except for world building. Specifically the cultivation aspect of it. Since the cultivation aspect wasn't built step by step but rather in an info dumping manner, I am as of now still unclear of what his entire plan is doing. If the cultivation knowledge was built up in a more reader friendly manner, I would've rated it higher. The story development is excellent so far and the world building is phenomenal as well. I only have a complaint about the cultivation aspect of it. Another thing I believe the author can work on is the descriptive aspect. Increasing your vocabulary and designing scenes that seem to literally suck the readers attention can do your story wonders.

The writing is very interesting and makes me really look forward to the upcoming developments. The world-building is detailed, too. Keep it up! I hope you continue to improve and succeed!

Just for FP..............................

read just a few chapters and I'm already hooked keep up the good work author and please don't drop this one