Really nice so far. The writing quality is great and the written content is fun. The developments are a bit sudden, but its great theres not info dumps. Id rather the story is made in this way. The characters are OK, they werent particularly special and had pretty simple lines. Nevertheless, there was a lot of insteresting content that had me wanting to read farther than i did. I stopped and had to leave a review.(Ch5)
a pretty good novel with an interesting concept. id like to see it get picked :). there is a sort of wholesomeness about this novel due to the cute interactions between the ML and FL.
The story is still not failing to amaze me.....the progress of the plot can only be described using one word: perfect. Long TAO is rather calculative and plan well. Let's see what happens next.Awaiting the next chapter.πππππππ
Been reading up to 8 chaps now. Quite a cool plot you got here. I like how you stick to your character designs. Raymund only think of this as entertainment and nothing more. He's pretty laidback, not strictly driven to win the entire thing, definitely more concern about his chosen hero's 'performance', if you catch my drift. I don't particularly like him for the demeaning actions he dished to Elise, but it match with his background and current state of mind, I'll give you that. And what I like about Elise is her believable, logical reaction to the happenings around. She wasn't an avid WN reader or RPG lovers who expect a reincarnation and casual 'you are the chosen one' situation. Hence why the need to scream and run as her initial instinct. Kudos to you.Hopefully, you don't rush things and keep th character developments to happen slow. Keep up the good works, author :D
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